a lunum waits

a lunum waits written by Carrie Zinn This is a brief visual novel I made in just over a week, using RenPy. It uses public domain paintings by early 20th-century Lithuanian painter Mikalojus Konstantinas Čiurlionis for the handful of pictures. The story, such as it is, is loosely based on a dream I might have had, and some of the text is transcribed directly from my dreams. Some of the sounds are field recordings, others are sounds I created. I was like 12 the last time I tried to make a game, and Im not used to publicly sharing things I write, so I welcome any feedback about any aspect of this...