FISHING MINIGAME

In a JRPGish world, our heroine must go through a fishing minigame for the sake of 100% completion! This is a real short visual novel that I made in a few hours in Visual Novel Maker. It was having a free weekend and I thought, "might as well play around with it."[TELL ME IF ITS WORKING OR NOT I DONT TRUST VISUAL NOVEL MAKER TO BE WELL OPTIMIZED TO BE HONEST]