Issues Cancelled (DEMO)

You are in a comic book... about to be cancelled! So you can only travel in between panels! Collect your thought (bubbles) and avoid knock-out stars or youll start over in this 3 level demo.. What do you think? Should I keep it more traditional manga entirely in black and white, or is the enhanced gameboy COLOR idea ok? The plot isnt fully fleshed out (its just a demo) but depending on feedback could become full comic/game! Arrows to move, X to jump, Z to hide seen text. Enjoy!