Prophecies of Ourleidus

A mistake of the gods will condemn the destiny of the 8th Entangled World and the Prophecies of Ourleidus will begin to be fulfilled... This is my first game ever (as you can see playing it :P). Its an outline of a greater story I want to create in future. I hope you enjoy and please, give me some feedback. Thank you! PD: Im not english speaker so... sorry for bad english here and in the game :(