Untitled cinematic experience

I thought I would try something narrative based, a bit schlock-noir, and create the start of a story. This was a project carefully planned out to spend a good part of nine days trying out cinematic shots and setups and learning a bit of lighting along the way. Life decided to blow everything up and I maybe got 10 hours in total. So, you get what you get. Everything is first pass and, well, a bit less intuitive than Id like. But at least I finished something. I really wanted work dinosaurs in the...